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If you want you can post the bios for your characters in the Public Character Profiles section. It'll give us some more background on who they are and whatnot. It's hard to jump into a story with fancharacters when little is explained about how they got to where they are with the canon characters.

It could use a bit more description too. I can't really picture Victoria because you didn't describe her. What colour is her hair? Is it long? Short? Is she thin? Muscular? It's always good to give visual descriptions, especially for fancharacters because we don't know what they look like (Negs isn't as much a problem since we all know who he is).

I had to laugh though... count on Red to insist on some lovin'. He's such a horndog! She needs to bust out the spray bottle.
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